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    March 01

    final draft,third composition

    My wonderful future

                                                                                  Final draft, third composition

     

    There are 3 periods of time in people life . They’re past , present,   and  future. Past is the time before present . We can’t go back to the past  for repair the mistake. Present   is now, we can do everything in this time. Then  future is  the time that we can’t  see.

    Now  I’m study in Mattayom 5. After I finish high school, I want to study in Chiang Mai University in faculty  of Arts Media and Technology. In university I hope I will have freedom life. I want to live in dormitory with new friends. I want to meet a lot of new friends. In university, I want to have a bicycle for tiding inside university but I  like to have motorcycle to ride outside university. At the time that  I study in university, I want to do partime job because I must use a lot of money. I need to do partime job in magazine company.  I hope when I study in university, I will feel very happy. After I finish from  university. I want to work in the industry and then I will have my own business. It’s my own magazine in mini company. Finally,  I want to have my small house. I need it will be located in the north of Thailand . I  don’t like big house but I like the small house with a beautiful garden. And the  very  important thing, I need to take care and return to my parents who give everything for me.

            The future is uncertainly because we can’t see it. If we want to have a good future. Now we have to  study hard ,diligent and get the good way. I think we will  have the best  future.

     

               

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    pearwawrote:
    Response sheet : Personal Experlence Writing
     Writer  sasiporn Intawan
    responder  Warunya  Tmmajitajaruen
    1. what did you like best about this paper ? What really well ?
    - I like everything.
     
    2. What questious would you ask the writer about things in this paper that were confusing or unclear to you ?
    - When are do you a pastime job ?
     
    3. where in the paper would you like more detail ? Where could the writer show instead of telling ?
    -What Pastime do you want ?
     
    4. Rate each of following on scale from 1 to 4.4 is tops.
    1. Title      3                3. Ending     3.5
    2. Beginning    3.5
     
     
    5.For each item you score low, make a suggestion for improvement.
    -  All that's ok
    Mar. 2

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